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Who: Rufus N. Hebernowski, an air force major

What: crash, air force major was killed, 15 cars destroyed

When: Monday at noon

Where: at the northern parking lot of the Super Shopping Mall, a huge new mall on the western edge of town

Why: do not have a why

How: he died in the jet crash

Air Force major died after crash landing his jet into the northern parking lot of the Super Shopping Mall Monday at noon and destroying 15 cars.

Rufus N. Hebernowski was an air force major from outside the local area. His life ended in a jet crash which occurred outside the new mall on the western edge of town.

Who: Assistant Superintendent Max Hoemmeldorfer

What: enrollment drop

When: Monday morning

Where: board meeting

Why: do not have a why

How: board voted

The Hattiesburg Assistant Superintendent warned about the future of Hattiesburg schools at the board meeting on Monday morning following a successive three year enrollment drop.

Enrollment this year has dropped to 1,050 students from the previous number of 1,250, according to Assistant Superintendent Max Hoemmeldorfer. Also, the board determined changes in rules and policies include forbidding miniskirts, forbidding blue jeans, forbidding male students from wearing their hair below their ears, and accepting a bid by Farmer’s Dairy to provide milk for the students at a low cost.

Who: associate professor of rural sociology John Dumont and associate professor of english George Johnson of Backwater State University

What: jet crash during takeoff, 5 killed, professors safe

When: Thursday night

Where: Kennedy International Airport

Why: do not have a why

How: came from separate conferences in NYC, crashed during takeoff

Two Backwater State University associate professors are alive and without injury from jet crash that killed five people Thursday night during takeoff at Kennedy International Airport.

Associate Professor of Rural Sociology John Dumont and Associate Professor of English George Johnson of Backwater State University were coming back from two different conferences in New York City and happened to take the same TWA jet home that crashed. Both professors were unharmed after the accident, but five people lost their lives.

Who: Pulitzer Prize winning author Norman Meeman of My Life as Far as It Goes and audience of 67, mainly English students

What: spoke to audience about writing

When: 4:30 p.m. on Sunday

Where: Room 111 of the William Oxley Thomson Memorial Library

Why: do not have a why

How: do not have a how

Pulitzer Prize-winning author of “My Life as Far as It Goes” spoke to a student audience on Sunday at William Oxley Thomson Memorial Library, criticizing their English coursework.

Norman Meeman won the Pulitzer Prize two years ago and came to talk to a group of mainly English students about writing. There were 67 students in the crowd, and Meeman gave them his advice on how to become a better writer, advocating his view that they have to experience life instead of reading texts for English class.

Who: George Washington medal winners including Clement Crabtree, professor of horticulture

What: The Freedoms Foundation announced its George Washington medal winners

When: at ceremony Thursday

Where: Valley Forge, Pennsylvania

Why: do not have a why

How: Washington won for his essay “Plan for Peace” where he advocated for freely distributing packets of red, white, and blue flower seeds in foreign countries

A professor of horticulture was among the winners awarded one of the George Washington medals given by the Freedoms Foundations at the ceremony at Valley Forge in Pennsylvania Thursday.

Clement Crabtree, a professor of horticulture, won one of the George Washington medals for an essay he wrote. His essay titled “Plan for Peace” advocated for freely distributing packets of red, white, and blue flower seeds on foreign soil.